You have used your imagination well to write a very entertaining story with lots of great vocabulary. Well done I loved reading your story. Next time you could edit your work without the teacher's help so you get to know where to put in the punctuation marks.
Excellent effort with the slideshow and completing the story that didn't have any words. I also like the pictures you have selected to help tell your story.
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You have used your imagination well to write a very entertaining story with lots of great vocabulary. Well done I loved reading your story. Next time you could edit your work without the teacher's help so you get to know where to put in the punctuation marks.
Excellent effort with the slideshow and completing the story that didn't have any words. I also like the pictures you have selected to help tell your story.
Please relabel this under 'Writing', thank you.
Miss H
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