Making a Plan

I am learning to make a plan before I write my story. I was easy to make my small meant.

Damien

On the holidays l made a castle out of cardboard

Me and my mum painted it white so it would not just be white

On the holidays me and my Mum went to my poppas house. When I got there Gracie and Bella hugged me. Gracie, Bella and poppa went out. Me and  Mum made a castle out of white cardboard. When me and my mum were finished we waited for an hour or two. When it was finished we took it home.         

Making a Connection

I am learning to describe the characters in the story and make a connection. I had a little bit of trouble thinking of the words. I was able to think about things I do like the characters in the story. Next steps for me are to find words in the story that describes the characters.