Monday 23 March 2015

100 word challenge

One day it was a very suney day suddenly I saw godzilla it was crazy it blew up a tower boom! I got a sowed then... godzilla made minoens " what the" I siad. The minoens had mini sowed's. I stabed and stabed   and finlley I stabed them all but... I had to deal with godzilla it blasted fire! I ran and ran. Then I found a gold sawed. I chargd! I found a poshin that mackes you giant. So I drank it. Then the challnenge was on! My sawed was big to. I punched godzilla he was dead very well.


We have been learning to add detail to our writing by doing the 100 word challenge.
          

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

Great work buddy. You like writing stories aye? Love you son.

Dad.