Tuesday 16 February 2016

Apple story


My Reflection

This was tricky because all the mistakes rather then that it was easy.  My next step is to write more.  Over all I think I did well

2 comments:

Ms Meikle said...

You have used your imagination well to write a very entertaining story with lots of great vocabulary. Well done I loved reading your story. Next time you could edit your work without the teacher's help so you get to know where to put in the punctuation marks.

Unknown said...

Excellent effort with the slideshow and completing the story that didn't have any words. I also like the pictures you have selected to help tell your story.

Please relabel this under 'Writing', thank you.

Miss H